tell me what you think of my blog please

Thanks for sharing - just opened in a new tab and about to check it out. Lately electricity is intriguing me, so...

It's terrible.

I find it kind of hard


to read stuff that's


kind of formatted


like poetry, and it's confusing because


it's not


poetry.


Like, it would be okay if it WAS


poetry you were writing but,


It's...


not.


Sooo...


Try paragraphs and proper punctuation/capitals.






Other than that, it's a good looking blog. Keep on keeping on. Share it around on sites that share your interests/writing topics (like you did here), and you'll gather some friends/readers up.

What do I think? I think you speaka my language. Or one that I have very little trouble understanding, at least.
For that, I am grateful.
Is there a 'we relate' smiley?

It's interesting you should say that.
If I saw a massive wall of text at this point - I'd bypass it. However, the format it's in invites me to read with the idea it's gonna be quick.
Yep. I could read pages of that - and not even bother with a half a full page.
Thanks for bringing that into light for me, MO.

The ranting and drivel of an insane man.

The psychologists would love it. They can conduct thesis.

You Sir, remind me of a lil ditty I once heard.

"The sane man is the one who knows insanity,
While the insane man is the one who dwells inside sanity."

Last Edited by DoubleYou on 05/25/2012 03:07 AM

thank you

You're Welcome, and Thank You for the Inspiration.

i think you're gay