The plot for a book to help me get a few coins, good plot or nay? | |
MHz
(OP) User ID: 2956246 Canada 07/08/2013 07:52 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Lets throw some more into the 'plot'. Let's say another symptom of exposure to mold is dizziness and in my line of work being dizzy means at some point you will experience a 'slip, trip or fall' and because of that I quit an industry where I was making $30/hr and had I attended heavy equipment school to get 'certified' on a grader and excavator I would be working almost non stop the full year. At maximum rate and with my own service truck and working 'out of town' I would have been grossing $10,000/ month. That is a potential loss of income of about $500,000 in 5 years. The cash-pot at the end of this rainbow grows. I want to take 10 cats on as 'clients' as each of them is also exposed to 'a preventable condition' and even though it is only the older ones that currently have breathing problems exposure would still qualify as being 'cruelty to small animals', having to give them up for adoption and them not being adopted but being 'put down' would be the top of the list as far as cruelty goes. I'm going to add their insurance companies into the list of fuckers that deserve to have their wallets lightened, partly because after they will be suing their former clients and that only strengthens my claim in that they were intentionally letting an unsafe condition continue and the consequences just went further than they imagined. So that is $100,000 back rent, $500,000 lost wages, $xxx,000 for pain and suffering of the symptoms of low level exposure to mold and moderate levels for the two weeks following any rain that was more than 1.5cm in a 24 hr period for the entire 12 years that 'we' lived here. $1.1M and $900,000 for my expenses as acting as my own Lawyer. $2m and double that, if not more, for the short term and long term effects that it would have had on a person living under the same conditions but being 12 years old at the start and quitting school because of the side effects of the mold. I guess phase I would be the health inspector a knock, knocking at my door, ...... Am I going to be arrested for refusing to abandon the residence and live out of my truck while the owner and realtor get to keep my damage deposit for a month or two as a way to legally fuck me around just a little bit more ... |
MHz
(OP) User ID: 2956246 Canada 07/10/2013 02:32 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Any slower we would be going in the opposite direction. To speed things you call up the receptionists at ***** Health and explain that your request for an inspection and explain that you have been put on hold for more than 3 days, (wheezing and a cough isn't even faked), within 30min the chief inspector is there clipboard in hand. Babbles on about mold being hard to prove, I snickered to myself as I pushed the back door open (pushed, no turning of anything, lol) and he looks up and the ceiling is missing and he sees to the top of the rafters, then the rest of the west wall is boards stained black, he almost faints before the inspection is over. Is the ending too strong of a prolog? How do I make it appear that I show up at a lot of different counters with the same query 'I want to sue my landlord .... and suddenly everybody within hearing range has something very important in another room that has to be done right away. I'm assuming it because a lot of paperwork is going to be involved rather than somebody escaped from the zoo. To be continued, ... or not, ..... it's that kind of story. lol Last Edited by MHz on 07/10/2013 02:33 PM |