Just got finished recording an original song of mine!

>20s in and I'm enjoying it. You sold me on the solo. Good shit!!!

You solo damn well.

I like it!! Good work OP

Whoaa thanks guys, I wasn't expecting really anyone to reply. Lol! But thanks, I appreciate the feedback ya'll.

Will check it out when I get off work! (soundcloud is banned here.)

Nice chops, kinda fuzzy though.

Thank you! I appreciate it!


Cool! Let me know what you think when you hear it! And yeah I completely understand, I worked at a call center a while back that banned soundcloud, but not reeverbnation? Weird. Lol.



Well thanks for your feedback, and yea, there's some hiss I couldn't really eliminate that when I did, it would've taken out a lot of the mids, but then again it was probably the program I was using -- it has limits. Lol. But thanks

Good show, it's awesome OP!

Thanks AC! :D

This Texan says hell yeah!

Pretty good! Keep it up

Sweeeet. Texas brothers.



Nice, Thank you disembodied! I'll give you a in return!

You kind of rolled over into my sound library for a minute, auto-plai (word is censored ) took over and I was enjoying the other music as well. You clearly have a lot of talent, keep going don't stop and keeping doing what you love!

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Broooo i think its absolutley beautiful, enjoyed every minute of it, could feel every note in my bones n heart, loved it, it reminds me of Dynasty Warriors at the start YEYAAHH!! lil bit heavy on the distortion aye, but hey if your ears are pleased with it man then thats how it is bro, Nice Job OP, ROCK ON MANN!!!

Texas sister!

That is excellent op, great work...

Haha, yeah that's typically soundcloud once the song gets finished. But thank you so much! All my other stuff I have on there are just song ideas I created using a program, not really pure instrumental creativity like this one in particular. Lol. But thank you again!



Awe!! Thanks New Zealand AC! Haha, it definitely has that fast guitar playing intro like the Dynasty Warriors theme, Lol! But thank you again man!



Oops! My mistake.


Sweet ASHA! Thank you!

the production is not my style, too gooey.

strip off all those effects and make it more raw.

also need to add some funky base

Cool,

Heavy compression in some areas.

Some melodic ascending/descending dual lead
would accent some highlighted spots.

Any non instrumentals ?

Your ideal vocalist would sound like whom ?


Keep it up bro.

No prob! I am curious as the other poster, who would your ideal vocalist be?

David Wilcock would be awesome

Haha, I getcha. I originally wanted to do it all completely instrumental, but I found writing rhythms and drums came easier working with specific programs -- but with the main melody, I had to stick with my own guitar. Lol!



Yea man, I added a lot of legato runs in there to highlight the -big- notes, and with the Major/Minor 3rd harmonies really only worked in certain parts. You should've heard how I originally did it -- dual leads every where! Haha. But thanks! And hmm.. that's a question I've never been asked before. Lol.

It'd probably be a toss-up between Johnny Solinger (Skid Row's lead singer) and Brent Smith (Shinedown's lead singer) -- They both have incredible vocal talent that I could definitely accentuate with some guitar melodies. But thanks man, I appreciate the feedback

HAHA! Comment of the fuckin' night

Lol I think a adding vocals would mess it up too

Oops, thought that wilcock response was from op!

It sounds great just like it is

Nice jam OP...good work.

Oops, skipped over that question. And I have a few, but nothing worth showing really. Lol. I had a band in late highschool/early college era. But it didn't pan out. Lol. I'm working on some original stuff with the singer I'm playing for now (in my signature)

but if you wanted to hear some stuff, this is part of a song I wrote with my band maybe like 4 years ago? We recorded this playing live. And I am NOT the singer here btw! LOL

Thanks man! I appreciate it!