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theFALLEN KING Offer Upgrade User ID: 60299165 United States 08/20/2014 12:45 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	poem i wrote im not feeling good lately i feel burnt out on life so i wrote a poem to express how i feel... i dont ever write poems so its not that good... tell me if it makes sense to you! Lethargic as fuck Feelin stuck in my own head Feelin dumb for all the things That I've said My ego makin me feel like I'm evil But for real tho I just wanna feel free yo Fuck having money that shit be making you act funny It's time to inhale that dmt and so you can see this isn't want you are meant to be Can't comprehend how we can bend space and time jump through a worm hole to another galaxy people asking where I be I'm a god so I be chillin by Sirius But when I'm in the astral I ain't that curious about what you think Be gone in a blink of an eye Your body dead but your consciousness is infinite That ain't no fucking lie It's actually ancient fucking knowledge Shit they don't teach in college Last Edited by theFALLEN KING on 08/20/2014 04:12 AM just a dumb broke boy

Yeats User ID: 55510809 United States 08/20/2014 01:01 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem?
theFALLEN KING (OP) User ID: 60299165 United States 08/20/2014 01:16 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem? Quoting: Yeats 55510809 are you serious ??? just a dumb broke boy
Anonymous Coward User ID: 61171717 Sweden 08/20/2014 01:16 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Ever heard of the writing symbol called period?
Anonymous Coward User ID: 61171717 Sweden 08/20/2014 01:17 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem? Quoting: Yeats 55510809 are you serious ??? Quoting: theFALLEN KING It's a valid question. I'm confused too.
theFALLEN KING (OP) User ID: 60299165 United States 08/20/2014 01:36 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem? Quoting: Yeats 55510809 are you serious ??? Quoting: theFALLEN KING It's a valid question. I'm confused too. Quoting: The Swede sorry guys for my shitty grammar and sorry its not in actual poem form just a dumb broke boy
Anonymous Coward User ID: 32712483 United Kingdom 08/20/2014 01:43 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote You have potential to be a great writer.
Dr. Acula Senior Forum Moderator User ID: 54326 United States 08/20/2014 01:48 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem? Quoting: Yeats 55510809 are you serious ??? Quoting: theFALLEN KING It's a valid question. I'm confused too. Quoting: The Swede sorry guys for my shitty grammar and sorry its not in actual poem form Quoting: theFALLEN KING If you were to break it down into Stanza's it would be nicer an example of Stanza's [link to en.wikipedia.org] and dont worry about the grammar... sure its nice to have proper grammar... but dont focus too much on the technicalities... that will only hinder the artist within... _______________________
Anonymous Coward User ID: 22142383 United States 08/20/2014 02:00 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem? Quoting: Yeats 55510809 are you serious ??? Quoting: theFALLEN KING It's a valid question. I'm confused too. Quoting: The Swede sorry guys for my shitty grammar and sorry its not in actual poem form Quoting: theFALLEN KING It's okay, as long as you express yourself. In 30 seconds you fulfill my desire Your declaration of it to me like a choir Radioactive magic for this is required And in the end of this opus your warmth I've acquired [link to t2.gstatic.com]
Anonymous Coward User ID: 61896509 United States 08/20/2014 02:02 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote feel like I'm reading rap lyyrics without the ho's and 40's
theFALLEN KING (OP) User ID: 60299165 United States 08/20/2014 02:50 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote feel like I'm reading rap lyyrics without the ho's and 40's Quoting: Equinsu Ocha i could turn this into a rap song just a dumb broke boy
Anonymous Coward User ID: 61896509 United States 08/20/2014 02:54 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote feel like I'm reading rap lyyrics without the ho's and 40's Quoting: Equinsu Ocha i could turn this into a rap song Quoting: theFALLEN KING hell yeah. it would work.
Anonymous Coward User ID: 61526857 Canada 08/20/2014 10:44 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote The "yo" kinda threw me off...

zCommonAnomaly User ID: 61912308 United Kingdom 08/20/2014 10:52 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem? Quoting: Yeats 55510809 are you serious ??? Quoting: theFALLEN KING It's a valid question. I'm confused too. Quoting: The Swede sorry guys for my shitty grammar and sorry its not in actual poem form Quoting: theFALLEN KING a poem can be in any form, it wants to be...:-). I like it.
Anonymous Coward User ID: 21684120 United States 08/20/2014 10:53 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote feel like I'm reading rap lyyrics without the ho's and 40's Quoting: Equinsu Ocha i could turn this into a rap song Quoting: theFALLEN KING Do you also kick it in the hood to freestyle at the kickbacks?
Anonymous Coward User ID: 46828066 United States 08/20/2014 10:59 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote ... are you serious ??? Quoting: theFALLEN KING It's a valid question. I'm confused too. Quoting: The Swede sorry guys for my shitty grammar and sorry its not in actual poem form Quoting: theFALLEN KING If you were to break it down into Stanza's it would be nicer an example of Stanza's [link to en.wikipedia.org] and dont worry about the grammar... sure its nice to have proper grammar... but dont focus too much on the technicalities... that will only hinder the artist within... Quoting: Dr. Acula Great post.
141 User ID: 57389201 Canada 08/20/2014 11:04 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Thanks for sharing my friend I really like your poem and get a feeling of what is real from you behind the words And that's what matters thy it is real and it it you, real sharing will always hi something in others so thank you and lots of love to you Hang in there, we will make it better together... just be love in truth...
Anonymous Coward User ID: 61909024 Uruguay 08/20/2014 11:06 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote
Anonymous Coward User ID: 55510809 United States 08/20/2014 01:02 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Which group of words is the poem? Quoting: Yeats 55510809 are you serious ??? Quoting: theFALLEN KING Yes I was serious. When you first posted this thread your second paragraph was a wall of text. After my comment you later edited your post. That was a good move. I can see now which group of words you meant to be the poem. Don't like it though. Maybe it's because I don't listen to rap. You do have some admirers though.
Anonymous Coward User ID: 48921177 United States 08/20/2014 01:06 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Roses are red, Violets are blue, Your poem really sucks, And so do you.
theFALLEN KING (OP) User ID: 4598923 United States 08/20/2014 01:54 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote Roses are red, Violets are blue, Your poem really sucks, And so do you. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 48921177 Thank you just a dumb broke boy

Anonymous Coward User ID: 47096853 United States 08/20/2014 01:59 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote do not want
davId User ID: 39253629 United States 08/20/2014 02:10 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote don't let the critics sadden you this is one of the toughest crowds you'll play to keep pitchin- it's great when you hit the mark!
Anonymous Coward User ID: 25256812 United States 08/20/2014 02:15 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation	Re: poem i wrote don't let the critics sadden you this is one of the toughest crowds you'll play to keep pitchin- it's great when you hit the mark! Quoting: davId 39253629 ------
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