A poem I wrote

Forgot to close the quotation at the end there

EDIT: gonna take a leaf from my own books and not post that particular link

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Besides, there's music that'd fit my current tone better

.... for the last word:

Ought perhaps to be 'Genius'?


....


Maybe

Assuming 'salt' = sodium chloride

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The ladies would rather go to bed with a poet than anything, even a German police dog… – Charles Bukowski

Neither animal, vegetable nor mineral and yet validated in whole by its unremarkeable persistence


But doesn't that defy contemporary biology theories?

Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Your poem really sucks,
And so does your mom.

I see you have no copy of origin on it so I will steal it and turn it into a top ten music recording

As if yours is somehow better.

Do it


Axl Rose thinks he's hot shit cause he wrote 'Out Ta Get Me' in like 40 minutes

Well if my mom hadn't been hounding me to clean up my room instead of important things like writing down inspirations

I said to her, "Mom, the room'll still be here in forty minutes, right?"

And she was like: "OMGWTFBBQ 1337 h4x0rz!!!!11!"

.... this could actually be like an 'In Flames' song or something

Nightwish maybe

Or Dreamtheatre

"And appeared did it then,
a ticking-time-clockwork,
as mind's eye, in fancy,
sought after there a wander.
Enter: a locomotive by power,
a brassier to great weight:
a will of its own, and/or
a will's faithful absconder"


....


"I get up around seven,
I get outta bed around nine,"


....


actually, I note and appreciate the difference, I think

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Well it's meaningful to me because it calls into play the question of altruism


That it BE dissociated here from the concept of 'mature woman' seems.... new

.... maybe just a different 'strain' if you catch my drift

.... noted so as to fully accept the responsibility of my herb use

Salt is used as a bio-regulatory mechanism, without it life could not exisr

Most people fail to consume the daily amount recommended by the FDA and it is somewhat reviled in contemporary thought. Looks like sugar's gonna be tagging in though, hardy-har-har.


Anyhow it's like, the 'ammo' fired by cells with nicotine receptors on them or something? Also, fun with psychedelics and lithium = permanent shift or just temporary?


.... that last one's rhetorical

Oh, now I get it! Cause they engineered it in the first place so they can enslave more of the - for themselves!


Man, that IS funny!

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So, uh, how's that going for you guys anyhow?

By the way, this was sort of a response to this poem by a nineteen year old Miss Emily Brontë.


Now trust a heart that trusts in you
And firmly say the word Adieu
Be sure wherever I may roam
My heart is with your heart at home

Unless there be no truth on earth
And vows meant true are nothing worth
And mortal man have no control
Over his own unhappy soul

Unless I change in every thought
And memory will restore me nought
And all I have of virtue die
Beneath far Gondal's Foreign sky

The mountain peasant loves the heath
Better than richest plains beneath
He would not give one moorland wild
For all the fields that ever smiled

And whiter brows than yours may be
And rosier cheeks my eyes may see
And lightning looks from orbs divine
About my pathway burn and shine

But that pure light changeless and strong
Cherished and watched and nursed so long
That love that first its glory gave
Shall be my pole star to the grave.

that was a beautiful poem.

These are probably my favourite lines I have ever written:


"For thicker's a castle's walls
than any archer's volley's thinness"






"and while salt will kill a rose,
it'll spark a-blaze her witness"

yes, and apparently she was only 19 at the time

in 1837.


.... that to me is rather astounding