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Iniquitous

 
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Iniquitous
Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the hour

Child of the Nightmare
Hydrogen Destroyed

Carbon growing weaker
Cyanide deployed

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Frugal Fragrance Failing
Fruit of Fascist Features Fading Fast
Feed Pharaonic Failures
As Their Future Fades To Past

Paint a broken picture of the lies you lived out loud
As the cruel and ancient spectre shows its body to the crowd

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the hour

Beauty is a fragile thing
The knave spoke to the squire
In this empty chamber hall
We set its seed on fire

As we steal the crown of man
And build the throne upon his carcass
None of us can see the hand
Now striking down upon us

The writings on the ceiling as the spiders climb the wall
And the children of the dreaming one have actualized our fall
So well cry to eagles swirming, twixt the seas of silent dreams
As the ancient war of eons sounds beyond our primal screams

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Oh Beautiful Forsaken Heiress Child of the Myst
Take this fragile heart and feel the warmth of human kisses
'pon Thine Brow as Angels Cry Within; Then Gouged and Eyeless
Dying, They cry out as Sons of Heartlessness lash out at heirs of timelessness

Forgotten Feline Felidae are Forging Future Faun and Flora
Foraging through Forests Born of Flight, Fiduciary Trauma
Feigning Failure to the Future Failure's Architechts of Fraud
Foaming and Forlorn the Pharoah Fumes the Aural Astral Odds

Nine Forgotten Chambers Show the Secrets of the Seven Lost
Eleven Buried Secrets Chained to Richard's Hallowed Buried Ton
Imaginary Demons Validated by Ensembles Black
The Hidden Hand Unseen Demands a Sacrificial Soul Attack

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Nostradamian embassies in cappadocian fields
Egalitarian tyranny bleeds new cydonian reels
Cruel despotic and blackened seas sew webs of common complacency
Descending edicts of decency embedded in kerosene wheels

Flying through Fractals Masonic and Freed
From the Curse of the Absence of Failure and Greed
Flavius Carolus Merovee Pendragon
Follows the Falsehoods Faux Freedom was Built Upon

Into the Future The Nuclear Shines
Into the Past the Heiress of Time
Sews discord twixt light chords as vessels of clay
Crown adam as god and enthrone her as day

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Last Edited by loveexists on 12/30/2017 08:51 AM
Because of the very nature OF duality, one must accept as factual duality's transient presence in order to truly comprehend its objective non-existence
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12/30/2017 09:16 AM
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Between this space enlightenment established
By action and by rule as certainty
And that time where light has been extinguished
Some eyes must find another way to see
That what seems crossed is parallel in true
The heart of intersection that was key
To intricate geometries that grew
Beyond their bounds consuming what was free
Is void and emptiness that must be bridged
And elements of building will be three
The wording of the source now unabridged
The destination now unknown country
The art to unsee now and see unseen
Which path will wind beneath the evergreen
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12/30/2017 10:02 AM

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clappa
That is really superb.
Coy

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12/30/2017 10:03 AM

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What does this mean?

Nine Forgotten Chambers Show the Secrets of the Seven Lost
Eleven Buried Secrets Chained to Richard's Hallowed Buried Ton
-Haun-
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Exquisite.

:666tttyy7:
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:1dunno:
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crazy
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12/30/2017 10:24 AM
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You are lost in your own delusions

You and stu should get a room
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"The love of knowledge is a kind of madness" C.S.Lewis

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12/30/2017 10:30 AM
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you are all delusional

You are lost in your mirror world

Delusions

This world is not real
saved

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12/30/2017 10:35 AM
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Re: Iniquitous
Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the hour

Child of the Nightmare
Hydrogen Destroyed

Carbon growing weaker
Cyanide deployed

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Frugal Fragrance Failing
Fruit of Fascist Features Fading Fast
Feed Pharaonic Failures
As Their Future Fades To Past

Paint a broken picture of the lies you lived out loud
As the cruel and ancient spectre shows its body to the crowd

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the hour

Beauty is a fragile thing
The knave spoke to the squire
In this empty chamber hall
We set its seed on fire

As we steal the crown of man
And build the throne upon his carcass
None of us can see the hand
Now striking down upon us

The writings on the ceiling as the spiders climb the wall
And the children of the dreaming one have actualized our fall
So well cry to eagles swirming, twixt the seas of silent dreams
As the ancient war of eons sounds beyond our primal screams

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Oh Beautiful Forsaken Heiress Child of the Myst
Take this fragile heart and feel the warmth of human kisses
'pon Thine Brow as Angels Cry Within; Then Gouged and Eyeless
Dying, They cry out as Sons of Heartlessness lash out at heirs of timelessness

Forgotten Feline Felidae are Forging Future Faun and Flora
Foraging through Forests Born of Flight, Fiduciary Trauma
Feigning Failure to the Future Failure's Architechts of Fraud
Foaming and Forlorn the Pharoah Fumes the Aural Astral Odds

Nine Forgotten Chambers Show the Secrets of the Seven Lost
Eleven Buried Secrets Chained to Richard's Hallowed Buried Ton
Imaginary Demons Validated by Ensembles Black
The Hidden Hand Unseen Demands a Sacrificial Soul Attack

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Nostradamian embassies in cappadocian fields
Egalitarian tyranny bleeds new cydonian reels
Cruel despotic and blackened seas sew webs of common complacency
Descending edicts of decency embedded in kerosene wheels

Flying through Fractals Masonic and Freed
From the Curse of the Absence of Failure and Greed
Flavius Carolus Merovee Pendragon
Follows the Falsehoods Faux Freedom was Built Upon

Into the Future The Nuclear Shines
Into the Past the Heiress of Time
Sews discord twixt light chords as vessels of clay
Crown adam as god and enthrone her as day

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour
 Quoting: loveexists


Great stuff OP! 5 Stars!
Come And Take It!
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12/30/2017 10:37 AM
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What does this mean?

Nine Forgotten Chambers Show the Secrets of the Seven Lost
Eleven Buried Secrets Chained to Richard's Hallowed Buried Ton

 Quoting: Coy


It means the op is really bored
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12/30/2017 10:38 AM
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Re: Iniquitous
Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the hour

Child of the Nightmare
Hydrogen Destroyed

Carbon growing weaker
Cyanide deployed

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Frugal Fragrance Failing
Fruit of Fascist Features Fading Fast
Feed Pharaonic Failures
As Their Future Fades To Past

Paint a broken picture of the lies you lived out loud
As the cruel and ancient spectre shows its body to the crowd

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the hour

Beauty is a fragile thing
The knave spoke to the squire
In this empty chamber hall
We set its seed on fire

As we steal the crown of man
And build the throne upon his carcass
None of us can see the hand
Now striking down upon us

The writings on the ceiling as the spiders climb the wall
And the children of the dreaming one have actualized our fall
So well cry to eagles swirming, twixt the seas of silent dreams
As the ancient war of eons sounds beyond our primal screams

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Oh Beautiful Forsaken Heiress Child of the Myst
Take this fragile heart and feel the warmth of human kisses
'pon Thine Brow as Angels Cry Within; Then Gouged and Eyeless
Dying, They cry out as Sons of Heartlessness lash out at heirs of timelessness

Forgotten Feline Felidae are Forging Future Faun and Flora
Foraging through Forests Born of Flight, Fiduciary Trauma
Feigning Failure to the Future Failure's Architechts of Fraud
Foaming and Forlorn the Pharoah Fumes the Aural Astral Odds

Nine Forgotten Chambers Show the Secrets of the Seven Lost
Eleven Buried Secrets Chained to Richard's Hallowed Buried Ton
Imaginary Demons Validated by Ensembles Black
The Hidden Hand Unseen Demands a Sacrificial Soul Attack

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour

Nostradamian embassies in cappadocian fields
Egalitarian tyranny bleeds new cydonian reels
Cruel despotic and blackened seas sew webs of common complacency
Descending edicts of decency embedded in kerosene wheels

Flying through Fractals Masonic and Freed
From the Curse of the Absence of Failure and Greed
Flavius Carolus Merovee Pendragon
Follows the Falsehoods Faux Freedom was Built Upon

Into the Future The Nuclear Shines
Into the Past the Heiress of Time
Sews discord twixt light chords as vessels of clay
Crown adam as god and enthrone her as day

Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit

Imaginary Valour
Weaker by the Hour
 Quoting: loveexists


Great stuff OP! 5 Stars!
 Quoting: saved


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12/30/2017 10:39 AM
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Thank you. I enjoy poetry.
Great words for a metal song...
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12/30/2017 10:41 AM
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Thank you. I enjoy poetry.
Great words for a metal song...
 Quoting: mona lizard


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12/30/2017 10:49 AM
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clap
I don't know what lies they told you, but I can promise they were lies.

Silencing yourself and living in the dark just means you've left yourself exposed to the type of people who wander the dark looking for victims who won't scream.
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Most excellent!
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Thank you. I enjoy poetry.
Great words for a metal song...
 Quoting: mona lizard


Yeah, it's really something that wants to be read out loud, or sung. It's fun to say.
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I love poesy...

There once was a girl from Bermuda,...
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That was so cool. Thanks for sharing
Existential
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hf
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Excellence! *5
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Twilight zone off words and feeling s are uttered, we now are in a wordless world of grand celebration in our dream.
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Great chant.
They've lost their religion, they've lost their parents; their identity lay with the estate.
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you are all delusional

You are lost in your mirror world

Delusions

This world is not real
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 73665748


Iniquitous
Complicit
Seductress
Explicit
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:awakemysoul:

hf
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TO OP:

Lovely.

Empowering.

Deep...

...Thank you for the insight, you are the light of our world, this country I believe? I felt that you were speaking of the US. My thoughts (without having read the rest of the comments in this thread.)

cool2
A Coot is a Bird....
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The gray skunk is odorless.
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The gray skunk is odorless.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 69173020


Unless by chance you breath.


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Op that some of the best prose i have seen on this site
bravo.
hankie
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Twilight zone off words and feeling s are uttered, we now are in a wordless world of grand celebration in our dream.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 75996080


Yes and this made me think of the twilight zone, there is only one way to fix, the ones who control the horizontal and vertical. You have to break their sets, TV, radio or any words they try to use, there is their power their words.

Now, I have to figure out why that poem made me think of the Twilight Zone.
Sorry I got a headache

These are the times that tries men's and
women's souls!

May we come though it victorious!
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Twilight zone off words and feeling s are uttered, we now are in a wordless world of grand celebration in our dream.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 75996080


Yes and this made me think of the twilight zone, there is only one way to fix, the ones who control the horizontal and vertical. You have to break their sets, TV, radio or any words they try to use, there is their power their words.

Now, I have to figure out why that poem made me think of the Twilight Zone.
 Quoting: hankie


I was playing some white noise you tubes last night
too block external sound specifally lyrics from party stereo's
ect.Mabey it slipped into the aether.

[link to www.youtube.com (secure)]
Its somewhat reminisant of thehe twilight zone play in.





GLP