Something I made a few months back and wanted to share with you guys | |
First Born Son
User ID: 76473933 United States 07/27/2018 10:43 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I really like it! I was a bit confused at first, I thought the lead drone was pulling something... Then I realized it was firing a laser and side mounted guns. Personally, I'd lose the laser? But I LOVE the Muzzle flash from the guns. So there... a honest opinion. I might share one or two of my works of "ART" later... Let you tear them apart. You are definitely head and shoulders above my skill level. |
Louis in Richmond
That is my arm now; broken for 7 months User ID: 75092940 United States 07/27/2018 10:45 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | It's better than anything I could create. The only two things that appear 'off' to me are the store sign language vs. the language on the sign (they differ), and the robot thingies--are they shooting at the man or are they shooting at the storefront? I'm in my doctor's office so my next reply may be delayed... Last Edited by Louis in Richmond on 07/27/2018 10:46 AM Until your military service has required you neutralize enemy combatants and invaders in the defense of your country, don't presume to tell us that have defended you that you don't support every shot we fired to eliminate that enemy. |
GTB
(OP) User ID: 76338020 United States 07/27/2018 10:45 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I really like it! Quoting: First Born Son I was a bit confused at first, I thought the lead drone was pulling something... Then I realized it was firing a laser and side mounted guns. Personally, I'd lose the laser? But I LOVE the Muzzle flash from the guns. So there... a honest opinion. I might share one or two of my works of "ART" later... Let you tear them apart. You are definitely head and shoulders above my skill level. Thanks for the honest critique. The laser is definitely the first thing I would change. I think I failed at making them interact with the atmosphere around it. Would love to see some of your stuff as well!!! I'd rather be real and rejected than fake and accepted. Individualism is the logical conclusion of rational political/social opinions. Leftism is the absence of any. |
GTB
(OP) User ID: 76338020 United States 07/27/2018 10:48 AM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | It's better than anything I could create. Quoting: Louis in Richmond The only two things that appear 'off' to me are the store sign language vs. the language on the sign (they differ), and the robot thingies--are they shooting at the man or are they shooting at the storefront? I'm in my doctor's office so my next reply may be delayed... Many thanks, sir! Yeah...continuity certainly was overlooked here lol. The drones are shooting at something behind the wall he is up against. I made the sign from scratch, the wall came from an image of a prison fence or something. I didn't get that perspective right. Last Edited by GTB on 07/27/2018 12:06 PM I'd rather be real and rejected than fake and accepted. Individualism is the logical conclusion of rational political/social opinions. Leftism is the absence of any. |