Poem about me, take it or leave it. | |
Anonymous Coward User ID: 76565514 Switzerland 05/30/2020 09:40 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | I am the sword that separates left from right Quoting: An Anointed One 78669752 Declaring Gods Word in the darkness of night I behold all that exists I silence the madness that relentlessly persists I will not stop until the will is done Fulfilling a work on a cross long undone The books of mankind's deeds I have seen Even the Book of Life I know what I mean I do not lie, ask the Spirit to tell I will ascend and put death upon Hell You may mock, scoff, and reject this thing It is the end and the beginning that I bring Who I am, does not matter I've seen all that exists on a starlit ladder I alone possess the eyes of God And I alone will rule with an iron rod. The Morning Star is mine, it shall be true You may think this is about me but its actually you For I am the chief servant of El Shaddai The Holy Spirit bears record, I for I. Brad Green, go fuck yourself with a rotohammer |
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Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 78669752 United States 05/30/2020 11:14 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Personally, I like poems that have rhythm and meter--like songs without the melody. Quoting: Anonymous Coward 78970364 Slapping rhymes on the end of each line is no substitute for rhythm and meter. If you can't chant it, if it doesn't have cadence, it's not a real poem. Thanks, typically I write about relationships and my love for significant others. They flow more naturally. I literally started a new thread and just typed out the first things that came to mind rather than orchestrating it line for line. Give me a second, I'll post one of my deeper ones. Its not really chant like but I enjoy its meaning. |
Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 78669752 United States 05/30/2020 11:15 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | Immeasurable innocence is perplexing to the fool's mind. The contemplation of satisfactory performance in a charade that proves itself all too worthy. Yet, in the stillness of a delicate winter night, I subject myself to an otherwise misfortune... The wisdom of an obsolete mind. When the fantasies of a crazed mind blend in symphonic harmony of absolute perfection, There shall misfortune have its day with providence. My woes, my distractions. Though seemingly inescapable, Are nothing to the truth that resides. Some day, Beauty. Majesty. Contemplation will have run its course and precedent will have its day. Knowledge shall fade. Wisdom shall reign. I shall humbly bow before the ineffable throne of mercy. In my attempts, In my prevails, What matters most shall come to pass. The passing of time is an illusion to the mind trapped within it. |
Anonymous Coward (OP) User ID: 78669752 United States 05/30/2020 11:23 PM Report Abusive Post Report Copyright Violation | No. My identity is irrelevant in the context that my beliefs are so radical, none would believe me. I dont do miracles or wonders, but I have the eyes of the LORD which give me visions every few months. These eyes that I see circle around me, the planet, the universe, etc. They are dazzling white flashes that look like lightning. Had them my whole life. I have had people call me by an old name, mentioned a few times in the Bible. Ive even had a neighbor say she was going to worship me, even though she was a devout Christian. I never asked her about it, because I felt it was the Spirit of Truth speaking through her. Anyways, it doesn't matter. Things will unfold as they should and I need to be where I'm supposed to be spiritually, equipped for every time, place, and purpose. |