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A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:

 
Anonymous Coward
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A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
Dragon's Eye's

By Nobody

How can one who is dying,
Offer and give eternal life?
I merely have one simple desire,
To look into the Dragon's Eyes,

As it quickly begin's to die,
To watch Satan's last gasp,
As the blood pours fast,
From it's putrid corpse,
As the Dragon burns to ash,

You have lied and deceived,
Even subdued the Elect,
Cast down many of the star's of Heaven,
But you will still die like a man,

Every tick is closer,
Every tock is a reminder,
Of your inevitable demise,

You have waged a foolish war,
That never offered hope nor surprise,
How could you expect to survive?

Your way's are plain to all,
Who truly worship in truth,
I have challenged you and won,
You where beaten by the most subdued,

For my Father and Savior are with me,
Beyond my own end,
I wish to grab you by the throat,
And hold you in the fire,

Watch as you die,
Is my only desire,
To see the evidence of life,
Flee from the Dragon's Eye's,

The Sword I was given,
Was used to run you through,
Your servants are all exposed,
Everything you sought has been unraveled,

Your plan's and schemes,
Torn to pieces and ruined,
Oh I long to watch you die!

In our mutual hate,
We both deserve to be erased,
For my sins I'm forgiven,
While you will be permanently stained,

Those stains will burn you,
Until your truly erased,

No more will you terrorize,
Your very name will be forgotten,
While I dwell with my Heavenly Father,
You will leave no reminder,

Even the pain you cause,
Will be healed in due time,
My Father will wipe away my tears,
And only love will shine,

When the Dragon's Eye's,
Are blotted and no longer see,
Creation will be at peace,
In the Father's most sublime design.

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I use the word "dedicated", in the single most sarcastic way possible.

It is doubtful I will ever add this one to any of my future published collections, what does GLPers think of it?
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08/11/2020 04:18 AM
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
He got a lil peice of you though..didnt he,op;)
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
He got a lil peice of you though..didnt he,op;)
 Quoting: Jb 78684524


Perhaps, but only the worst part of me was damaged and destroyed.

Still though, what did you think of the poem?
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08/11/2020 04:23 AM
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
He got a lil peice of you though..didnt he,op;)
 Quoting: Jb 78684524


Perhaps, but only the worst part of me was damaged and destroyed.

Still though, what did you think of the poem?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 41846532


Poems not bad, ego is a lil swelled.. And you could be very wrong about a soldier doing a job.
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08/11/2020 04:29 AM
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
Meh, do better.
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08/11/2020 04:38 AM
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
He got a lil peice of you though..didnt he,op;)
 Quoting: Jb 78684524


Perhaps, but only the worst part of me was damaged and destroyed.

Still though, what did you think of the poem?
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 41846532



The worst part of you is ok it seems.
Try some coloring books because you suck at poetry.
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
op you are a sado masochistic person, definately you are not one of the good.
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08/11/2020 04:45 AM
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
bump
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08/11/2020 04:46 AM
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
I think it’s a great poem. Those who don’t probably have Satan in their hearts so don’t worry about what they say. Remember he is a deceiver.
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
Do you Krush your pets too?
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
Dragon's Eye's...................

 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 41846532


j15kitty This sort of stuff will not end well if you die in your sins.

j16
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
I think it’s a great poem. Those who don’t probably have Satan in their hearts so don’t worry about what they say. Remember he is a deceiver.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 37673162


Yup, he is. A great deception in order to give you freewill.
See.. If god could be proven..i bet that would take that away..or most would tow the line only because they knew that had to. Pretty good deception, because we cant prove god.
We can assume we can..but we really cant.
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
Dragon's Eye's...................

 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 41846532


:j15:kitty This sort of stuff will not end well if you die in your sins.

:j16:
 Quoting: Judethz


Did you even bother to read it? Seriously, putting something in "something", is meant to illustrate extreme sarcasm.
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
Dragon's Eye's...................

 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 41846532


:j15:kitty This sort of stuff will not end well if you die in your sins.

:j16:
 Quoting: Judethz


It is a poem dedicated to the death of Satan, and how the Dragon/Satan's death, is an inevitability.
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
It is a poem dedicated to the death of Satan, and how the Dragon/Satan's death, is an inevitability.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 41846532


kitty Oops.
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
I think it’s a great poem. Those who don’t probably have Satan in their hearts so don’t worry about what they say. Remember he is a deceiver.
 Quoting: Anonymous Coward 37673162


Yup, he is. A great deception in order to give you freewill.
See.. If god could be proven..i bet that would take that away..or most would tow the line only because they knew that had to. Pretty good deception, because we cant prove god.
We can assume we can..but we really cant.
 Quoting: Jb 78684524


we already have proof of good...its the "empty space" that holds everything together

100% pure energy
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Re: A Poem "dedicated" to Satan:
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