Trying a new style of music. Dark BASED indie electronic..let me know

This is gay

This is gay
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It's good. Keep going!

Post the stems and I will remix it an make it badass.

It has potential... just needs a producer to pull out the good parts and make them dominant.

I am a producer. Literally just started this track less than an hour ago. I haven't even gotten to the production yet, still building sounds

I like it.

That being said.. I'm looking for collaborations

That's cool... why post so soon then?

Regardless, in it's simple state, I can hear some really cool stuff that can be done with it.

Good start, either way.

To guage if people like this style.. it's not generally what I do.

GLP isn't exactly the place to gauge receptivity to edm styles...

BUT... I do this shit daily so I would love to send a few files back and forth... no harm in that, right?

I love collaborating... especially with vocal tracks.

I do a lot of sound design and arrangement stuff, so vocals are like gold

it sounds like Muse

OP, do you like Knife Party/Pendulum?

I like pendulum.. was thinking if doing a drum and bass best on this.. I'm still tinkering.. might end up tracking my real drums

Nice dude.

Outside of my main job, I spend a lot of time making synth patches/sounds.

A lot of dubstep/DNB sounds, mostly

where's the snare???

I just started this song . Mainly was setting up vocal ideas

Needs more cowbell!

You aren't wrong... The lack of cowbell really limits it's potential.. Ill work on tracking cowbell

You have a very nice broody sound. I like it. My favorite is Stick Figure because I am a tropical kinda girl. That said my favorite music is EDM. I think you should explore adding some drum n bass or trap style to it. You definitely need more 'electronic' elements. You have a lot of good things to build on!

If that's you singing, you have a great voice; it's very smooth and very smokey (sensual, not cigarette if you get what I mean) I enjoyed listening :)

Keep it going!!!

This is nowhere close to EDM or "electronic" music.

It's electronic music.

Good voice!

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Could use more drums.

Sounds like you are a COLDPLAY FAN because it sounds just like Coldplay.

Not bad, but the singing is "Cliched"( you sound like many other contemporary singers).

Your vocals are too muted, indistinct, and don't carry the music.

Fire your mixer he is screwing up your work.

I'm hearing shades of Health in there. Sounds good so far, and I've added to favorites for later updates. Keep it going

yes, not bad at all. i had the same feeling.

The style sounds about two to three decades old, not really very "dark" and also sounds like you are incline to get vaxxed or already took the vax.