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Please check out my latest Horror Short Story - Knob's Hole

 
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Please check out my latest Horror Short Story - Knob's Hole
“I’m tellin’ ya, there ain’t no bottom to it,” Henry Knob said, peering down the hole into the darkness.

“That’s impossible,” Dave said.

“I’ve dropped rocks, a busted computer monitor, even that old refrigerator down there. Ain’t none of them ever hit bottom, at least not that I heard.”

Dave leaned over the opening which was about the size of a small car itself. Grass grew high along the edges and dirt spilled into the blackness making him wonder if they were in any danger, standing so close to the edge. If this was a sinkhole, they could be swallowed up at any moment.

“How did you find it?” Dave asked.

“I was driving my tractor out to the other side of my property and my back wheel got stuck. I gunned the engine, and it was a good thing I did because the ground had opened up. Far as I can tell, it ain’t got no bigger since then though.”

“That’s good. Hey, we can get some rope and lower a bucket down into it. Maybe it’s an old well and the reason you didn’t hear anything is because there’s water way down in there.”

“I already thought of that,” Knob said. “I went through about a mile of rope and shit-load of kite string until I gave up. The bucket didn’t even come back wet. I just don’t get it.”

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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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Tried to leave you a comment, OP, but WordPress says I have to be logged in at your site. Pretty good stuff. Has a TED Klein/Manly Wade Wellman/Karl Edward Wagner vibe to it. Enjoyed it. Keep writing.
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Re: Please check out my latest Horror Short Story - Knob's Hole
this a rip off of mel's hole?
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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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Thank you, very much.
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Half way through. Loving it!
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this a rip off of mel's hole?
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this a rip off of mel's hole?
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That's actually where I got the idea, off Coast to coast, but this is fiction and a lot different. Especially the ending.
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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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Thank you, very much.
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Half way through. Loving it!
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Thank you
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Tried to leave you a comment, OP, but WordPress says I have to be logged in at your site. Pretty good stuff. Has a TED Klein/Manly Wade Wellman/Karl Edward Wagner vibe to it. Enjoyed it. Keep writing.
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Thanks, I've had several dozen shorts published in Anthologies and a couple novels as well. My newest Novel The Southern house will be out later this year from Stitched Smile Publications.
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Tried to leave you a comment, OP, but WordPress says I have to be logged in at your site. Pretty good stuff. Has a TED Klein/Manly Wade Wellman/Karl Edward Wagner vibe to it. Enjoyed it. Keep writing.
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Thanks, I've had several dozen shorts published in Anthologies and a couple novels as well. My newest Novel The Southern house will be out later this year from Stitched Smile Publications.
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Yep. I Googled you. I've read a few of those anthos (after hearing about them on Brian Keene's podcast). Good stuff!
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There is other fiction on there by me as well. I'm listed on the right side.
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Just one bump , I promise. Enjoy the read.
THanks, Everyone
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These holes are everywhere, my Grandmother owned property in Palatka Florida with a hole about the size of a car. She found it back in the early 1950's, it hadn't change a bit in 2000 when the property was sold.

Like the op said, they threw everything imaginable into the hole, lengths of rope, never heard anything hit bottom.
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These holes are everywhere, my Grandmother owned property in Palatka Florida with a hole about the size of a car. She found it back in the early 1950's, it hadn't change a bit in 2000 when the property was sold.

Like the op said, they threw everything imaginable into the hole, lengths of rope, never heard anything hit bottom.
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That's insane. Perfect place to hide a body though.
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I enjoyed what I read a great deal. I'm bookmarking this thread [for your link] to finish it later when I have more time.

I also intend to read some of your other stuff. Thank you!

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I enjoyed what I read a great deal. I'm bookmarking this thread [for your link] to finish it later when I have more time.

I also intend to read some of your other stuff. Thank you!

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Thanks Haun
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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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I was that guy (on my phone)

love stories like these! altho i usually listen to them rather than reading them :)
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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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I was that guy (on my phone)

love stories like these! altho i usually listen to them rather than reading them :)
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Stitched Smile Publications will actually be putting out Audio books on Audible soon. Yes, I usually get a couple books listened to a month on my way to and from work.
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This Knobs Hole is as scary as the Bells End......
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It's good.
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It's good.
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Ok I'll read it. Just didn't want to if its a rehash of Mel's hole
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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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I was that guy (on my phone)

love stories like these! altho i usually listen to them rather than reading them :)
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Stitched Smile Publications will actually be putting out Audio books on Audible soon. Yes, I usually get a couple books listened to a month on my way to and from work.
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damn :( just wrote a long ass reply but named another forum so my post didnt go through.

but basicly i love creepypasta. and i hope you know what kinda of a huge phenomenon they are on youtube. i follow dozens of channels and some have over a million subs.

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I love creepypastas. If this is any good ill advice the story to my favorite youtune channel :)
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I was that guy (on my phone)

love stories like these! altho i usually listen to them rather than reading them :)
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Stitched Smile Publications will actually be putting out Audio books on Audible soon. Yes, I usually get a couple books listened to a month on my way to and from work.
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damn :( just wrote a long ass reply but named another forum so my post didnt go through.

but basicly i love creepypasta. and i hope you know what kinda of a huge phenomenon they are on youtube. i follow dozens of channels and some have over a million subs.
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Me too
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Re: Please check out my latest Horror Short Story - Knob's Hole
“I’m tellin’ ya, there ain’t no bottom to it,” Henry Knob said, peering down the hole into the darkness.

“That’s impossible,” Dave said.

“I’ve dropped rocks, a busted computer monitor, even that old refrigerator down there. Ain’t none of them ever hit bottom, at least not that I heard.”

Dave leaned over the opening which was about the size of a small car itself. Grass grew high along the edges and dirt spilled into the blackness making him wonder if they were in any danger, standing so close to the edge. If this was a sinkhole, they could be swallowed up at any moment.

“How did you find it?” Dave asked.

“I was driving my tractor out to the other side of my property and my back wheel got stuck. I gunned the engine, and it was a good thing I did because the ground had opened up. Far as I can tell, it ain’t got no bigger since then though.”

“That’s good. Hey, we can get some rope and lower a bucket down into it. Maybe it’s an old well and the reason you didn’t hear anything is because there’s water way down in there.”

“I already thought of that,” Knob said. “I went through about a mile of rope and shit-load of kite string until I gave up. The bucket didn’t even come back wet. I just don’t get it.”

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